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Hello TheLearningWriter! Happy review day at YWS! I'm sorry my review will consist of a lot of nitpicks, but I seriously liked the story more than it may seem. Each ...

I saw this in the Green Room....Happy Review Day! I read your first chapter to try and get so here goes nothing. Overall, I liked the story. The plot is ...

(Just a warning: I've currently only read Part 3 so my review will be based purely off of this part). I'd just like to say, good job! I like the ...

Great job! I'm sorry I'm a bit late, it's Review Day and I was digging in the Green here I am! I liked your story, even though you don't blatantly ...

I find this story kind of funny in a way. It's definitely original, I've never seen something like it before. At times, I feel like it was hard to follow ...

I really liked this story! I liked how you described the costumes, I could really picture them in my end. For some reason, some part about the end didn't quite ...

Hey Muskan! Overall, I liked your story! I do think like anniegirl123 wrote, that the story is worried a little weirdly at times, I was a little confused about what ...

I like the story! The idea is pretty quirky and unique, that's what cool about it. It isn't one of those stereotypical plots, it actually seems.....real. I seriously don't have ...

Wow, it's a great story! I feel like the character is seriously a real person, they speak so authentically and with a lot of personal flavor. Good job! I really ...

Hey basia77201! I definitely agree that being alone can be nice! I actually really can relate to what you were feeling, I'm not the only one! You have mentioned this ...

Wow, great story xJupiter! Overall, I liked it and it has a great concept! There are just a few nit-picks here and there, but they are mainly due to personal ...

Hello chhlovebooks! I am here to review your short story. Overall, I like it, and I like the premise of it too. However, I think there are just a few ...

This poem was written extremely well. Now, I'm not very knowledgable when it comes to poetry but just from a reader's perspective, it was great! Your descriptions and metaphors were ...

Wow, I really like this poem. You really nail the rhyming and the descriptions! I feel as though the rhythm of the poem I feel like could be sing-songy or ...

I quite like this short story. I think you describe things very well, all of your descriptions were extremely unique. My favorite line is the last, "It's not the perfections ...