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:D I loved it!! I can hear this one as a song. You had pretty good rythm. And this is my favorite part: Oh, I'll shout out loud It won't ...

Hmm... I agree with Kit, about the Skin On Skin feel, which is good because I really love that song. Alas, I have a few complaints. 1. you rhymed everyday ...

>.< I hate acrostic poems, so maybe it's not fair for me to critique this. But it seemed kind of short... and, don't take this the wrong way, but it ...

Wow. That was absolutely beautiful. Your metaphors were really great and I particularly admired this line: "A herd of guilt gallops into a field of thoughts". Very original. Quippie likey! ...

This was really good. The emotions run strong throughout it... it even kind of made me sick inside (in a good way ;)). Conventions: You see a smile on my ...

I loved this! There were a couple of typos that made me go "huh?" "My prince will come on his shiny white house" should be "My prince will come on ...

*sigh* I really hate it when people make "I" lowercase, so please fix that. Also... "Guess it's a tie between you and Paul"? Well that's just great, unless my name ...

Firstly, let me say I loved it. Your imagery makes me feel as though I have actually been to San Fransico (I haven't) and it makes me feel like buying ...

Hmm... I agree with GingerLizzy. The repeated question after question is a bad way to write an entire poem. Questions are good, but don't over-do it. Also, I didn't much ...

I love the fact that I don't know what's goin' on! XD I absolutely love the first stanza; the second was pretty good... it sort of went downhill after that, ...

This is pretty good. I echo the words of the people on suggestions for you. One more bone: "Where are You" is already the name of another song. (It's a ...

Lizzy-- I like it!! I have a couple of suggestions to make it even better, nothing major. He looked across the table, With confusion and with woe. His blue eyes ...

Lizzy-- I liked this... sorta. I loved the idea, and the poem itself was cute, but I think you could have used better words. Describe the monsters. Channel more fear ...

*gasp* Don't let the sharks get the poor children!!! ...but I digress. I liked this. It was really creative. I opened it expecting to read some poem about a nice ...

[b]Do you see me as I am? Or is my reflection distorted.[b] This should be "Do you see me as I am, Or is my reflection distorted?" The intent pf ...