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Oh... my... God... That was amazing! Hahaha. It made me smile as I was reading it. I could hear it playing in my head too. ^_^ I love the part ...

Hello there. This was very-super-awesomely-cute, I must agree with everyone on that, however cheesy it was. Mkay, so, the second paragraph was great. You do a great job of conveying ...

I liked this a lot. ^_^ I'm not quite sure how, but the lack of emotion brought up... emotion. Something about how she's in some cold lifeless stone tomb both ...

Mkay. So this poem has some potential. But it also has a few major problems. 1. Punctuation, por favor? It'd make this a lot easier to read. 2. Maybe it's ...

Wow... Spell check, por favor. Also, I want to see more originality, because as it is, this makes me feel absolutely nothing. One more thing: what in the world is ...

Alright. This isn't... horrible. It's just kind of... ehh. 1. Please fix your title. "Tree" would suffice, but "Please Read My Work!!!" doesn't work. "Buds then leaves are on your ...

:D I liked it. You could replace more of the "My rose"s with pronouns though. And... whatever happened to punctuation? It is your friend! Cherish it! Oh. In the future, ...

Uh... hmm... at the expense of being shunned from the rest of your audience, I have to say, I was a wee bit disappointed. *braces for tomato ammo* Well, I ...

Hmm... good message, but you could have said it better. More poetically maybe? Ehh? *nudge* Ehem. "You know your killing yourself," "Your" should be "you're". Umm so yeah. This was ...

...LMAO! Okay, so without a doubt, I totally pwn all the other crit-er's before me on this one. I don't have to have a reason for that. Just trust me ...

Oh my goodnessies. This is the cooliest, most hard to understand, yet somehow incredibly awesome (rated PEEGEE) story, I have ever read... yo! ^__^ This is my favorite part: Robert ...

Hmm... pretty good, but it was really short. I think you'd need more verses to make a song, no? Interesting topic. Originality is always a plus. Umm... punctuation? And there ...

Aha! Yes! This is, by far, my favorite of your songs. It seems like it would be a fun song to sing, despite the fact that it's about how life ...

I kind of liked the first verse, actually, but I think the second one went too far. You're being a little overdramatic here. Might you be... bipolar? Check it out, ...

Argh, I hate it when people complain about being called emo, and then call themselves emo. Does that make sense to you? Not trying to insult you... So basically, I ...