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  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: Love The Dogs.

    Hey! This short story was very interesting. I really enjoyed reading it! The bluntness of the main character’s words is very beneficial to the story as it adds a quick ...

    Jan 1, 2017
  • Other » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Zach's Dream Paragraph Draft (PLEASE RE WRITE in your review)

    Hey! I think this story was very interesting and thought-provoking. I enjoyed the creative and out-of-the-box concept-- it was very refreshing to see. I liked your employment of color, as ...

    Jan 1, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Imperfectly Beautiful

    Hi! I really enjoyed this story. I love the themes of creativity and difference. You also greatly employ the idea of inspiration, which is one of my favorite subjects! Great ...

    Jan 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: "Goodbye"

    This is a really cool concept. I loved the fluency in the poem. I feel as if this is a speech from someone to everyone that has hurt them before. ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: There Are Holes in Her Eyes

    This is really great. Your description skills were very prominent in this poem. One of my favorite qualities of it was your ability to make a poem so childish yet ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: the days we lost.

    This is really great! I loved the rhyming patterns you used in this poem-- they really tied it all together. The almost childish plot of the poem was really entrancing. ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Void - Chapter 1

    I didn't expect to read this whole story, seeing its length and my obvious tendency to get distracted (who can blame me? that's what the internet is for), but quickly ...

    Feb 3, 2016


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