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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: leaving me scars on baltimore harbor

    Number one I LOVE THAT SONG WHATTTT I LOVE WRITING WITH IT IN THE BACKGROUND. A romantic poem combining violence with love, and posted just in time for Valentine's Day? ...

    Feb 17, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Growing Farther and Farther [A Continuation to Distanced Intimacy]

    Hi! I'll try my best to analyse and review your work, but just to let you know, this is without any knowledge of Distanced Intimacy- I might leave a review ...

    Feb 17, 2025
  • Poetry » Horror, Romantic Re: My Body Whole

    Hello! I've not reviewed many poems before, but I'll try my best with my limited knowledge. Sounds like a good one for Valentine's Day... As the Ballad Begins (first impressions) ...

    Feb 16, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: “Candy” - Part Three

    I AM SO SO SORRY FOR THE DELAY! As promised, a very belated review of Part Three and I'll get onto reviewing Part Four soon :D As the Ballad Begins ...

    Mar 7, 2024
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Lyrical Re: The Ant Who Nuked The World - A Rap

    The thoughts and actions of an ant who nuked the world will live on for eternity through this rap; I will make sure to sing it to my grandchildren. But ...

    Feb 14, 2024
  • Short Story » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Tomb

    hERE TO give an partially serious review on a joke piece ahaha because why not also, slightly late welcome to YWS :D There is a goat, his name is Sir ...

    Feb 14, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Witch of the Rotten Borough, Chapter Two

    As promised, a review of the second chapter of 'The Witch of the Rotten Borough'. Let's commence! As the Ballad Begins (first impressions) Oscar and Jo are greeted by the ...

    Feb 14, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Witch of the Rotten Borough, Chapter Three

    Hey, Horisun! Saw your work in the Green Room and figured I would give it a review :D As the Ballad Begins (first impressions) Jo has come to a smaller ...

    Feb 14, 2024
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: Zachary and Rosemary’s date

    Hello, Vampricone! Come to give a quick review for your short story :D As the Ballad Begins (first impressions) A piece set on a cute film date on Valentine's day ...

    Feb 14, 2024
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Literature Re: Life as a passage of knowledge

    Hey! Welcome to YWS, I hope you love it here :D here to give you a first review on your first work (yay) This is a very insightful look into ...

    Feb 13, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: "Candy" (Based on True Events) - Part Two

    Hey, Aaliyah! I loved reviewing the Prologue + Part One of Candy, so here is my review of part two, as promised. As the Ballad Begins (first impressions) Things have ...

    Feb 12, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: "Candy" (Based on True Events) - Author's Note, Prologue, and Part One

    Hey, Aaliyah! As promised, I will now commence the review of the start to your novel, Candy :D As the Ballad Begins (first impressions) Your writing is PHENOMENAL! Honestly, much ...

    Feb 11, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Walking Estranged Lands

    Hey, Avian! This is absolutely amazing! The whole time reading that I felt immersed into the story and the deep connections to emotion, like, woah. Here are some of my ...

    Feb 5, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Witch of the Rotten Borough, Chapter One

    Hey, Horisun! This piece is awesome, great to see some proper fantasy with DRAGONS (wyrms) on YWS! For the first time ever, i will try and write a review in ...

    Feb 2, 2024
  • Poetry » Technology, Culture Re: The Airport Looks Up

    Hi! I've never thought about the clouds this way! Definitely opens your eyes to look at the little things that we often take for granted in life, and you do ...

    Jan 29, 2024


Sometimes my life just sounds like surrealistic fiction being sold on clearance at the book store.
— J. G. Hammersmith