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  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Realistic Re: Child not bride

    Hey Will! Thanks for the review! It is encouraging,such praise

    Aug 20, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Realistic Re: Child not bride

    Thanks for the review donizback! And the statistics I've mentioned are global, not confined to Pakistan. My mistake I've not made it clear enough. Thanks for the review!

    Aug 20, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A new death.

    Thanks for the review! It proved really helpful. Im making the changes> :)

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A new death.

    thanks buddy! :)

    Jul 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A new death.

    thanks for the review! :) will work on it

    Jul 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A new death.

    Oh my God. Thanks for the review and such appreciation. You don't know how much an appreciation lift up your spirits! :) I'm grateful for your kind review! And yes, ...

    Jul 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A new death.

    Hey thanks buddy! :) such encouragement needed! :)

    Jul 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A new death.

    Thanks for the review! I'll work on the mistakes you pointed out and use your advice to the best. :)

    Jul 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: She's Brilliant

    Hey there, its Huda for a review. Skimming through the poem, i found it perfect in terms of spellings and grammar. 'And preys on weaknesses an insecurities'. It should be ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Monster

    Hey! Huda here, for a review. The poem is good and I appreciate your writing skill. I notice that you are new to YWS so its really awesome that you ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Monster

    :)

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Fix my heart...

    Haha! Thanks for such a great review! I want to see that writing of yours friend, I'll be waiting to read it. :)

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Fix my heart...

    Don't think of me as a silly person, but literally, I didn't add commas in my first edit, but then I thought how the published work is supposed to be ...

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Fix my heart...

    Percy, Thanks! for the review and the appreciation. I respect your suggestion and will surely keep it in mind the next time I write. :) I'm glad you liked it.

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Fix my heart...

    Thank you! Char, thanks for appreciating. :) The review encouraged me and yes, your suggestion is right. I thought sometimes repeating things just add to the intensity. Maybe, I could ...

    Nov 16, 2014


The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time.
— Mark Twain