horsez919

Hey! I love this poem, another person said this too but it's very unique. I really don't have anything to critique you on. :) The pillow of the night descends ...

Personally, I agree mostly with Vernon. She states very good qualities that have been left out. Vernon says: If you just say this and that, you lose the intended goal. ...

Very nice poem. It's kind of along the lines of mine. Except mine is titled "My Life As A Non Writer" Personally I like this one better than mine in ...

Very interesting...it's a different topic sort-of. At least, not many people I know write about their nightmares where they're having surgery done by aliens. There's probably critiquing to be done, ...

Very good. I like the rhyming poems you tend to come up with. don't turn you back on the door just a rule of thumb. This one part didn't really ...

This is a very good beginning, very descriptive and once in a while it'll give me a picture. A light breeze blew hair out of my face. I inhaled deeply, ...

This is a really good poem. I'm pretty sure all the rhymes fit together. The...syllables[?] got a bit weird for me, then again I should probably read it out loud ...

I like it, and it's you use good descriptive words in some places. I'm not sure about your rhyming. Or if this is a type of poem sort-of thing. [idk] ...

I liked your story, it's a very good start. In the beginning I was kind of confused ... maybe it's just me, but in the beginning I wasn't so sure ...

I really liked this poem. A little violent with the cutting and torturing of the bugs... but there's more horrible things in life. I liked the different kind of words ...

DO NOT STOP WRITING!! Your a great writer!! And you've never had any strikes or anything. Everybody who commented so far, basically gave everything, like critiquing and not giving up ...

Everyone already critiqued your writing I won't. :D I liked your whole plot, it was very different and unique. I read some of your other writings and I loved them ...

I love your song!! But..with the other comment, I need to know the tune. To feel how the song moves and sounds I guess. That some things just weren't meant ...

I loved this poem. Your writings are very thought out-I think- and very different in a way. It's cool how...I don't know..old people can relate. Haha Obviously, because they might ...

I liked it...and it seemed to rhyme pretty well. The last line about how we're all still awake or something...was different. It fit in a way though. Overall, it's a ...