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Thanks so much and i will work on those revisions! Thanks for the review! (:

Woah, you are a really good writer!! i read your 1st chapter, and i like how it flows!! It also makes a lot of sense which I love!! wow, there ...

No Prob!!! (:

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This is a really good story and you have a very unique writing style! I do have to say some things. Well, I would like some more description, of the ...

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This is a really good story and you have a very unique writing style! I do have to say some things. Well, I would like some more description, of the ...

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This is a really good story and you have a very unique writing style! I do have to say some things. Well, I would like some more description, of the ...

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This is a really good story and you have a very unique writing style! I do have to say some things. Well, I would like some more description, of the ...

You're welcome :)

Thanks soo much for the review! I will add more description! (:

you're welcome!

Thanks so much! I always like ideas from other writer and I will make the changes. The thing is is that sometimes in my story they will be speaking Russian, ...

i forgot to say, but welcome to YWS!

Sorry. I didn't know you were English! that's cool! my main character in my story is going to be English, so i hope u don't mind if i get some ...

Thanks! I'm glad u like it!

Thanks soo much! I will make changes to the chamber part!