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Re: Letting Go
His hands were pale comma delete when put as when they intertwined with hers. They were strong and rough comma delete and and she could feel the class ring cold ...
Sun Dec 05, 2010 1:39 am -
Re: Christmas with the Cullens part 2
A few days later, Alice hands me a Celtic gown that has a brown and white long sleeved top and a long, red plaid skirt. "Here Bridgid. Put this on. ...
Sun Dec 05, 2010 1:09 am -
Re: sweet sixteen and never been kissed part one
Short story, enjoy! "Large latte, please." I said comma in a timmid voice to the guy stood serving coffe. He looked down at me and I saw a slight smile ...
Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:15 pm -
Re: Love lies . (Please review) (:
I dont like the please review it sounds desperate...and I was almost not going to review because of it or the format...bad. If its YWS please let us know, I ...
Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:07 pm -
Re: Chapter 1. No name yet
Chapter 1 You should always have a title! Whether it be stupid or asking for suggestions that makes people want to read your writing more I learned it the hard ...
Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:01 pm -
Re: Bliss: the Chronicles of Charlie and Logan part 2 (edited)
Okie-dokie guys, here's my expansion. My sincerest apologies that it took so long to get out; between my homework and my evil parents taking my computer away from me, I've ...
Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:58 am -
Re: Kicking Like There's No Tomorrow
My life is in shambles. Those words were ringing through my head as I danced at my senior prom comma with the boy who was supposed to be my boyfriend. ...
Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:52 am -
Re: Golden Wings- chapter 6 part 1
When I got home, mom if you're refering to her like Shelli or something capital Mom wasn’t there but there was a big pile of flyers from her work on ...
Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:46 am -
Re: Can't Let You Go (Charlie and Logan chapter 3)
Bon jour mes amis! Here's my third part to Charlie and Logan. I have decided to mix Charlie giving birth to Addison with the night that Charlie and Logan first ...
Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:49 pm -
Re: Life's Surprises
Sorry if this is short, I accedintley submitted it before it was finished, the next chp. will be out soon. "Sure, tonight sounds great. comma not period " I said ...
Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:39 pm -
Re: 7 Minutes
It’s funny how you can get caught up in a silly comma little game. comma not period But I did. It was a typical Friday night for me, reading one ...
Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:25 pm -
Re: 7 Minutes (Part 2)
Stop! If you haven't read part one, here's the link: And if you have, then you may proceed. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:16 pm -
Re: Twilight
Today was the day. I could feel all of the anxiety that had been building over the past few weeks comma bearing down on me. My lungs seemed to be ...
Sun Nov 28, 2010 1:23 am -
Re: Liars and Cheaters
I really don’t believe that I pulled that off. Two women, one room: I am going to remember this night for a while. The Esquire ball is like prom night ...
Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:46 pm -
Re: A Place to Belong part 2
The next morning, Dr. Cullen sits down with me and Padraic comma along with the blonde haired boy and explains that our house can't be repaired, but he will find ...
Sat Nov 27, 2010 2:45 am
