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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Love and Music

    Hey Im Leyah :) I really havent said this in MOST of my reviews but i just kinda wanted to put this out there my english grammar isnt the best, ...

    Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:18 am
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Can't Explain

    Hey Im Leyah, Ok, now that you've got your grammar down ((haha)) lets look at the rhythm, the flow, the intrigue. Ce-mi place. What i like The rhyming is sketchy. ...

    Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:06 am
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Ways of POPULARITY

    Hey I'm Leyah. First of all ((but im sure YOU already know)) that all this is just MY opinion as the viewing audience.Ce i think what i think This was ...

    Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:48 am
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I'm too old to be this young.

    Hey I'm Leyah. First of all ((but im sure YOU already know)) that all this is just MY opinion as the viewing audience. Ca un teatru like a theatre I ...

    Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:33 am
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Living in my past

    Living in my past Everybody’s moving forward I’m stuck here Left behind Don’t know where to go I’m lost I’m breathless I lost my sense to direction you stated you ...

    Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:11 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: if you dont dance, well then your gonna die

    I loved the concept It reminded me the song "Human" by the killers (because their the KILLERS and they say are we human or are we DANCERS) okay well it ...

    Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:53 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Color White

    I love this poem, i dont have anything bad to say about it! Though i got confused, some of the commas look like periods so i was thinking "shouldn't this ...

    Fri Feb 13, 2009 4:18 am
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: When I'm With You

    Hello! This is a really good song, i also thought that heavy rock, metal, would make the song POP! The lyrics are good, i really liked how you used the ...

    Fri Feb 13, 2009 4:04 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Crooked Smile & Sad Eyes

    Wow, i think that was so beautiful. I really dont have anything more than whats already said. I loved the internal and external conflict. I cant wait to read the ...

    Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:20 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Freakshow Ch. 1

    Hi there! I really dont think that there is any mistakes that havnt already been surfaced. Except your paragraphs are a little messy you always want to complete a though ...

    Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:40 pm
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Breaking Dawn Parody

    Hi there! Ha i was a fan of twilight after the first 20 times i read it but it lost its flare and i thought it was the most idiotic ...

    Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:29 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: After and What's Left (Box-Full Of Toys).

    Hello there! When i first looked on this board (which this is my first time looking) I was drawn into the title. When i thought of someone going back through ...

    Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:23 pm


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