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Re: Love and Music
Hey Im Leyah :) I really havent said this in MOST of my reviews but i just kinda wanted to put this out there my english grammar isnt the best, ...
Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:18 am -
Re: Can't Explain
Hey Im Leyah, Ok, now that you've got your grammar down ((haha)) lets look at the rhythm, the flow, the intrigue. Ce-mi place. What i like The rhyming is sketchy. ...
Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:06 am -
Re: Ways of POPULARITY
Hey I'm Leyah. First of all ((but im sure YOU already know)) that all this is just MY opinion as the viewing audience.Ce i think what i think This was ...
Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:48 am -
Re: I'm too old to be this young.
Hey I'm Leyah. First of all ((but im sure YOU already know)) that all this is just MY opinion as the viewing audience. Ca un teatru like a theatre I ...
Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:33 am -
Re: Living in my past
Living in my past Everybody’s moving forward I’m stuck here Left behind Don’t know where to go I’m lost I’m breathless I lost my sense to direction you stated you ...
Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:11 am -
Re: if you dont dance, well then your gonna die
I loved the concept It reminded me the song "Human" by the killers (because their the KILLERS and they say are we human or are we DANCERS) okay well it ...
Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:53 am -
Re: The Color White
I love this poem, i dont have anything bad to say about it! Though i got confused, some of the commas look like periods so i was thinking "shouldn't this ...
Fri Feb 13, 2009 4:18 am -
Re: When I'm With You
Hello! This is a really good song, i also thought that heavy rock, metal, would make the song POP! The lyrics are good, i really liked how you used the ...
Fri Feb 13, 2009 4:04 am -
Re: Crooked Smile & Sad Eyes
Wow, i think that was so beautiful. I really dont have anything more than whats already said. I loved the internal and external conflict. I cant wait to read the ...
Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:20 am -
Re: Freakshow Ch. 1
Hi there! I really dont think that there is any mistakes that havnt already been surfaced. Except your paragraphs are a little messy you always want to complete a though ...
Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:40 pm -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Hi there! Ha i was a fan of twilight after the first 20 times i read it but it lost its flare and i thought it was the most idiotic ...
Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:29 pm -
Re: After and What's Left (Box-Full Of Toys).
Hello there! When i first looked on this board (which this is my first time looking) I was drawn into the title. When i thought of someone going back through ...
Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:23 pm
