heyitsisabel

Your nitpicking is perfectly okay critiques are always helpful! All work does need more editing. I was trying to make it seem like she lives in a small-almost run down-house ...

Yeah I didn't think so was no problem writing about this it was a very well written poem. :)

Hi I really liked this

I tried to make her life based around the first guy and how she really depended on him to be there and when she lost him she was lost herself. ...

Thank you so much, I was basing this poem (almost) around the cliche tragic love stories and I was worried that it wouldn't be original enough to call it my ...

Of course you do not have to agree with my writing or my style in writing but here is where I was coming from when I was writing it: I ...

I think it was pretty clear, I did understand what the poem was trying to say. I believe it was on my end by not making my review clear that ...

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I really like how you used a garden growing as a metaphor to love, it really had a good balance between the metaphors and what's actually happening to the character ...

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I really like how you used a garden growing as a metaphor to love, it really had a good balance between the metaphors and what's actually happening to the character ...

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I really like how you used a garden growing as a metaphor to love, it really had a good balance between the metaphors and what's actually happening to the character ...

I enjoy how you organized your work. The word choice is amazing; you consistently paint pictures of how you feel and what you believe. It's depressing and hopeful at the ...