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you are extremely talented, I would have such a hard time trying to write this with only 500 words. You'de really have to use the best description at the best ...

This has extremely beautiful imagery. I also really like these stanzas, and the way it seems to flow. I do have to admit that I have no idea what this ...

I actually do find power in here. I like the confidence. Very well done. I do agree about the flow. It seems a bit uneven. I don't really mind the ...

The stanza's need to be rearranged just a bit. They are a big part of poetry, they can actually create more emotion, believe it or not. I've learned this over ...

This has lots of potential, but you are right, it does need work! I mainly chose this because of the title. Sometimes it's good to just put the meaning right ...

I can't exactly get the emotion from this piece. I feel that emotion plays a very important role, depending on the type of poetry. I don't know whether this was ...

ahhh! I like this. It's great. I can feel the warmth, the joy. Imagery is one of the most important parts of poetry. You want to imagine the feeling, the ...

I like these types of poems, they just seem to flow, they make me think for a while. I'm not as good when it simply comes to realistic poetry like ...

This is very nice. Very realistic. Very emotional. It really made me sit and think. That's what poetry should do ;D I do think there should be more imagery though! ...

Yet another random poem. From a year ago. Trying to get a few differently written poems up so people can get a handle on my writing style. ^^ No god ...

well done ;D I really like the imagery here. It made me feel like i was in a carnival. My only advice would be to make the purpose or meaning ...

I love the title. It really defines the poem. It was green. I also really loved this line. so many people forget to put good to honest imagery in their ...

I don't know whether you do this or not, or if you would even want to, but it helped me. Lyrics make a real song. They are the purpose, they ...

This is very simple, yet I find it very mysterious. I can feel the emotion, it's rubbing off on me. Waha. Ruin my life. my only advice would be to ...