hesmiledatme

I like the idea of this poem. Your delivery, however, could be different in my opinion. I think instead of centering the lines they should all be left aligned. The ...

This piece didn't leave the effect on me that I was expecting it would. I like the idea of it, it's a strong theme but the way it was written ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this piece. The format of the poem makes it that much more effective. The words are so simple, yet leave such a strong impact. I guess ...

I love this. The best way to get rid of the nasty little devil that is writer's block is to just write, and that's what you've done. There are many ...

Okay, I just want to say I'm in love with this piece. Personally, I discovered I had dyslexia in high school. I did my senior project on the disorder and ...

This is a cute little poem that perfectly describes my life right now. It's simply written, but that's really all you need to get the point across. However, there are ...

I really like the way this is written in second person. The tense seems to change back and forth, but that can easily be fixed. I also like how life ...

This is a cute little piece. I feel like I can really relate to it. The repetitiveness of the same lines over an over almost makes me think of when ...

The story I see unfolding from this piece is someone who is confused about what they want. They can clearly see both paths, the sky and the ground, but there ...

I really like the form of this poem. I like short and to the point poetry, but then again, my mind always ponders at the many different meanings it could ...