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Thanks for the reviews, both of you! However, have added in verse to try and describe subject in question, but I'm not sure about it. The italicized is newly-added, so, ...

Yeah, sorry about that; I was more writing as a little thing of 'and this is how it was, before this story begins, so you have a good idea of ...

I think that this is something Stephanie Meyer's brain would collapse upon, because I think she has a big thing on marital relationships. On the other hand, they are her ...

Okey dokey. Uh, I reviewed the first thing you did, and I do have to agree with Giraffe. Why post a completely different story? Anyhoo, I'm just going to review ...

To GreenGiraffe (just to clarify) In the Darren Shan novel, The Lake of Souls, Darren and Harkat had to kill a black leopard in order to find the first clue. ...

Sorry about the world; I keep meaning to write a little on it, but then, well, I get distracted with thinking, 'What do I need to get the story running?' ...

After all that originality, although I do think I've seen sprite mail a couple of times before, you have to go and make your character a werewolf. Did you not ...

Really? I was inspired by the Three Days Grace song, Never Too Late, or at least, my version of the music video. Also, sorry about the characterization stuff. I'm not ...