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I like this better than the books. In the books, its 'And they end up happily ever after, with her married to Mr. Sparkly and with her own little-not-for-long girl.' ...

I was also slightly 'What?' at the 'the school didn't even have metal detectors' in Twilight; what the hell was her old school, an international airport? I like the inverse ...

I found this essay good; occasionally, we all forget that America performed a terrorist act themselves, so, while it doesn't make any other terrorists any better, it still points out ...

OK, its pretty good. I think it can go on some more, but also, I'd like to talk a little about fire ... First, I don't think that trick candles ...

Um, I dunno, are you sure this is supposed to be in Other Fic? No offense, but it sounds a little more like poetry. Character: This looks like a very ...

OK, I found it quite good; but some parts I think need a little brushing up: I dusted off the last tea cup and sighed as I gazed longingly out ...

Its a little short... That's what's struck me most. That and I didn't have a clue what was going on. "Don't ever lose your starlight, Starla" You told me. "You're ...

Whoah. Kind of reminds me of the Demonata series by Darren Shan; kind of. a violent shade of plumb Surely you mean 'plum'? To plumb is to fix the drains, ...

I like it; it works quite well as an introduction. Some things, though, annoyed me a leetle. You had to really know where it was or you’d never find it ...

I liked it; it had British characters rather than the Americans everywhere (no offense to any Americans). However, I dunno. Where is Haniel from? She doesn't talk like a modern ...

I... I'm not sure: is it, like, a parody? Of life in general? Wha-? It appears that there is no such thing as the 'comma' in Happydale. I saw numerous ...

I dunno. Its not exactly very original. Whooo, new house. Whooo, creepy old woman with shotgun. Whooo, beasties. Occasionally, your characters talk too... I dunno, not how people talk. “We ...

Like some of the other reviewers, I was a little disappointed. Nothing happens. Or at least, nothing that really makes me feel anticipation. Yes, its a raffle-lottery-thing. Whoo-hoo. Its an ...

Good song; gives the impression of something... whats it called, rock times pop equals actually good music? Power pop? Wakarenai. It seemed kind of short though; I mean, unless the ...

Whoah. This reminds me a lot of Jaqueline Wilson's 'Girls Under Pressure'; the thing on anorexia and the constant belief that the MC is an obese monstrosity. Some parts that ...