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Okay, hey, Jackie! Here to do a review. So, I'll just start with the thing that nagged at me; quite simply, the chapters are a little short. Typically, you want, ...

Hey! Tis me, Hero-Regular. So, first off, I enjoyed how it opened; a nice bit of characterization (we can get a little into Jack's skin), a good bit of backstory ...

Hero here to review! Anyhow, I found your points very interesting, but I personally don't agree with some of them. You talk about how love will inevitably end in heartbreak. ...

OK, well, having just read John Polidori's 'The Vampyre', I feel entitled to review one vampire story. By the by, why is it that every vampire since Polidori is basically ...

Wow. This was very bleak. Anyway, here's the reviewers! I feel that these kids just aren't too... Driven. Shouldn't that be 'I feel that these kids just aren't too... driven' ...

OooK, maybe this is because I haven't read First Story -- part 1 to 10, and you're just recapping for everyone, but for me (as this is the first part ...

Huzzah for absurdist theatre! However, maybe it's just me, but I wasn't really sure what was going on. I mean, e.g., Samuel Beckett, the great absurdist playwright, made an entire ...

:shock: Your school sounds terrible. Have you tried asking your parents if you can, I dunno, move school? I know you like the drama class, but, honestly, the cons outweigh ...

Can I just say, this reminds me of a song by My Awesome Compilation called 'Red Is For Danger'? Yeah. It sounds a bit like something out of the age ...

Right, so here's my review. I like the premise of the story, how they're kicked out due to the economy, how her family is split apart due to all of ...

Okay, so I'll give a little reviewette, or something. -Characters Clara: I was getting ready to hate her, I don't know why. Limyaael once said that angsty heroines who are ...

All right, I'm reviewing because it was in my Psychedelic Coat, and I must do it sometime. Sorry; haven't looked at it for a while. Anyway, yeah. It felt a ...

I quite liked it; it reminded me a bit of the song 'Only Happy When It Rains'. However, I'm not sure this is really Romantic Fic; maybe Other Fic? Indeed, ...

I liked it, but I think it ended too fast. It built up a lot of suspense and all that, but nothing really happened, or was explained. I mean, if ...

I like it, it has quite a good start. One thing I'd suggest is lengthening it a bit. After all, if it's a chapter, it should be at least 1,500 ...