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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wonders of a Moonlit World

    I was wondering, how do you do the neat little quotation mark thingy on your reviews?

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wonders of a Moonlit World

    Thanks so much for your helpful review!

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Don't Stop Talking

    The line mid-poem that you were talking about wasn't a twist. It and the line before it connect to say, "Don't make up reasons why I don't need to hear ...

    Apr 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Horror Re: The Wide Street

    This poem was referring to the wide path spoken of in the Bible. Thank you for the help on how to get my punctuation correct.

    Apr 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Horror Re: The Wide Street

    This poem was referring to the wide path spoken of in the Bible. Thank you for the help on how to get my punctuation correct.

    Apr 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Just Tired

    That's okay :) I'm new also, and I've had the same problem with posting the same things twice. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

    Apr 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Just Tired

    Thanks so much for the review! I will definitely check out the link to the website you sent and see what I can do about the punctuation errors.

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Just Tired

    Okay. And one more question: Once you've already published a piece of writing on YWS, can it be edited without messing anything up?

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Just Tired

    Okay. And one more question: Once you've already published a piece of writing on YWS, can it be edited without messing anything up?

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Just Tired

    I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem! The last two lines that you mentioned, which are also a highly repeated conversation in my own life, were the whole inspiration for ...

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Just Tired

    Thanks for the pointers, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Concerning the first stanza, I was trying to make all four lines one long question. Are you not supposed to ...

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Just Tired

    Thanks for the pointers, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Concerning the first stanza, I was trying to make all four lines one long question. Are you not supposed to ...

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Don't Stop Talking

    Thanks so much for the help! I like the idea of making the second to last line less wordy. It sounds a little smoother. The line spacing was messed up ...

    Mar 31, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Speaking

    Mar 31, 2015


Who wants to become a writer? And why? Because it’s the answer to everything. It’s the streaming reason for living. To note, to pin down, to build up, to create, to be astonished at nothing, to cherish the oddities, to let nothing go down the drain, to make something, to make a great flower out of life, even if it’s a cactus.
— Enid Bagnold