hermione2001

This made me laugh out loud. Seeing the title I thought this would be about a person who was an attention seeker but finding out it was about one's stomach ...

This is very realistic and raw which I really enjoyed. Also the length of the poem also fit into the aspect of fear and terror. A couple suggestions. First I ...

Wow. This is impactful. My attention was caught in the first line and it didn't stop until after the last one. This is seriously good stuff! A couple editing suggestions. ...

This was good. I think you need to decide what the structure is. For this poem, I think its free form which I love (it's my personal favorite). I can't ...

Wow. Just wow. This is so good!!! So, I'm assuming the starlight represents something that you loved and had to give up but in the end was beneficial for you. ...

Hi! So some suggestions. Grammar wise, be consistent with capitalization and punctuation. There are lots of little lines that just need grammar fixed and they would flow better. I love ...

Ok. First off, THIS IS FREAKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! I believe you are speaking of a shadow but at the same time describing the daily battle of our minds. Did I interpret ...

Even though it's short, this poem is very powerful. I would watch for grammar. I don't know if this was purposeful but there is no question mark after the first ...

Hi LadyAstella! First, I really love the message you are trying to get across. Although the teenage years are supposed to be the "spotlight of life," for most they aren't ...