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Thanks bae!

Thank you so much! Your review in itself is "pleasing to the pallet" ;)

Aww thanks so much! Your review made my day. Yeah I just wrote this when inspiration struck because fire really is a fascinating thing.

Thanks so much! I understand what you mean - the thing to tie it together is supposed to be fire actually, but maybe more parallel structure would've made that clearer. ...

Yeah it's certainly not my best stuff but it's just simple and short - I totally see what you mean though

Wow great review! Thanks for all the feedback. I myself am not religious at all, so I understand what you said about that. The reason I made those descriptions more ...

Thank so much!

No problem! You too :)

Thanks so much! I'll gladly put in your suggestions; they're very helpful.

Amazing poem! I love it so much. The rhyme and rhythm are on point, as is the word choice. I have absolutely nothing to say other than write on!!!

Lol thanks so much! Yeah when I wrote that line I really was just looking for a rhyme. As soon as I have some more time on my hands I ...

True true. Thanks so much! Yeah I wanted something to rhyme and I wanted to say something expressing how incredibly special the subject is to the speaker, so that's why ...

!Muchas gracias! I speak some Spanish btw :P Thanks so much! Those comments are really helpful

Thanks so much! This is the first time I've shared my poetry with anyone I'm not close with and your comment just made my day :)

Fantastic poem! A clear voice really comes through, and it feels like I'm legit listening to this person struggling with himself for this girl. Great rhyme and rhythm as well. ...