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"Anyway, I'm no poet, so that was really the only thing that I can comment on without making a fool of myself. Other than that, it doesn't really make much ...

This isn't my favorite of the Hourglasses, but its nice. For some reason I don't like it when you use 'Tis' I don't why though. And this one was a ...

I LOVE this!!! but the ryhming seemed VERY forced, like when you did this: Smell the dirt, Feel your breath, ‘Neath your shirt. Hey, you, touch the skies, Smell the ...

I like this alot, but I agree with everyone else; what is her moms motive for killing the dog? why did she do such a horrible thing!? and I also ...

I like this, but I agree with VoraciousReader_545. The conclusion isn't strong enough, it doesn't live up to your title. But, I do like this and can't wait to read ...

I really like this it is very descriptive. I really like the title, its great! I can really feel what your trying to say. This is my personal prefrence but ...

I like it, it was very grousome, but it didn't take anything away from the poem. But, I think I know what you were talking about, it seems like a ...

This poem is O.K, but its not one of my favorites of yours. I liked the beginning of the second stanza the most but then when you got to the ...

OMG this is sooooo freaky I have a friend just like that, the whole poem describes my feelings about this friend I have, even the 'shaggy blounde hair' looks just ...

This is a good poem, it had a good rythem and it was very enjoyable for me to read. But on this stanza here: "Wounds now may heal Bruises won't ...

I really like this!!!! it has a great message. But of course critque! here you go critque!!! :D I would like it better if you made stanzas and not just ...

I like the ryhme sceame and the flow. It was a nice poem to read but I don't agree with the message, or what I think is the message, it ...

This seemed like babbling to me, but in a good way, some how you got this to flow and make sense. But the overall, I guess, 'plot' of the poem ...

I don't know what to think of this poem, its good but their is something about that I don't like. And its a little bumpy, but with a little tweaking ...

Like your other story (New Story) this sounded true. This is an intresting format, I like it though, but its diffrent. Diffrent in a good way though. Although I have ...