Published March 13, 2005
It was interesting... *turns laptop upside down* nope that didnt help..im a bit confused, but it kept me reading..it needs more...gret writing though:)
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This isn't my favorite of the Hourglasses, but its nice. For some reason I don't like it when you use 'Tis' I don't why though. And this one was a tad confusing like when you write this:
Huh???? you'll proably clear that up in the next chapters but it was a little confusing to read with out any backround.
Favor for a favor great job Sam... i am too tired to point out mistakes or nything but.. otherwise good....
MONKEYS!!!