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Like I said--It's hard to get all the details in when you're writing initially. Don't feel like it's a bad thing to have to edit. :)

Again--you are so welcome. I live for reviewing! :) And wonderland? *dreamy*

You are so welcome, darlin! And I apparently did not pay enough attention. When I just reclicked the link to read your comment, I noticed that. I am going to ...

I had a feeling with the italics and stuff--It seems like formatting completely vanishes once you post something online. I've had it happen to me a time or too. And ...

nor a room of your own, have to share it, have to share it with the neighbours next door. That's the only place you repeat a line and because you ...

Okay--so I

I wouldn't say happy medium, necessarily but it ties back into the scene: descriptive scenes should have melded together sentences whereas action scenes tend to work better with shorter ones. ...

Yes, yes. However--you have to give enough of a tease into where you're going that the reader will be intrigued enough to continue. I think stories like this do work ...

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Um...I come from a family full of pastors. The belief isn't that Jesus is DIRECTLY god. It's that Jesus is the son of god--the spirit of god. Christians worship the ...

I'm starting to think I'm being too picky, haha. I think it's fine the way you have it if you like it best. My style is a bit more flourishy ...

EmilyWright: Have you even read the Bible? Also--did you note that I even said I wasn't a christian? You're not tearing apart my faith. And yes, it is just your ...

That's what I figured! Excited to see more!

I have a lot of practice reading, haha. Editing is a major pain in the butt, but that's why it's so great!

%u201CDon't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.%u201D %u2015 Anton Chekhov Now, writers are really divided on this bit of ancient writer ...