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You write songs yourself? We should collab sometime! Thanks for the review.

Thanks for the review! Haha I don't sing. I wish I could sing. Would make cranking out demos WAY easier. Anyways I used a Japanese synthesized voice software to create ...

Helps greatly, friendo! And about the redundant parts, again, trying to work with a premade melody. Gotta try to balance the two (^ ~ ^)> So about the randomly added ...

And you guessed correctly! The whole song followed one character. About splitting the melody into parts to have reviewers be able to follow them, think I'll do that next time. ...

Haha sorry if it doesn't make sense. I just tried to come up with some crazy story about a man whose problems he ran away from come back to bite ...

Thanks for the review! Hm. Seems that the repetition in this is polarizing. Interesting. Did you mean the repetition in the choruses, though? Weren't clear. And for the rhythm, I ...

Thanks for the review, ArcticMonkey! Sorry that there aren't any vocals to the music yet. I can't sing! And I'd never ask someone to demo a first draft. I've only ...

It's better!

Hm. I'll check out that course. What do you consider as unnecessary information in this piece? To me, I think I'm lacking info, which might be why the message is ...

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I'd like to thank you for the review yesterday, as well as return the favor. But before that, what a coincidence! Just wrote a poem inspired by a song yesterday. ...

As I said to my other reviewers I made the music first then the melody and lyrics. And like you, I don't know much about writing lyrics. This is my ...

Thanks for the review! It's difficult to write lyrics, so I'm not surprised that this isn't that good. For now, I'm only writing something that somewhat makes sense, but has ...

Yeah I'm quite determined to get it done, which is why the second half is like. So it's too much after all? Thanks for letting me know. Also thanks for ...

Thanks for the review! I'm surprised that you didn't think that there's a lot to fix with this song. Then again, that's my own opinion, and the reason why I ...

Commenting on your review. I really appreciate the fact that you took the time to read my work and give your thoughts.