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hi... So I'll be reviewing your piece today... To start its a good piece... But the only thing is it's too short.. You should add more to it.. Like the ...

hey.. so I'm reading it and my dad is sitting besides me.. and I start crying!! It was so touching and moving, and emotional and lovely!! It made me see ...

hi there... It was the title of your piece that caught my interest.. Nothing is more inviting to a potter fan like me than something like this.. This was a ...

gosh I loved it!! It was so funny and lively.. See i loved it so much that I even forgot to say hi to you... Hi!!! your poem was nicely ...

Hello... So I just Loved your poem.. The concept was good and that made it click.. Correct me if I'm wrong but I believe the poem was a free verse, ...

Hi there... So it was a good thing you didn't add a rhyme scheme... I'll be honest in saying that I didn't understand parts of the poem. But what I ...

Hi.. So first off CONGRATS!! I don't know you but I still hope it goes greatly and also that you'l be happy with him...:) Now for your poem... I really ...

Hi.. So starting off I would first say that you have successfully combined to things I love (Horse and Romance) To create a great masterpiece!! I wish there was a ...

Hi.. So as for your story.. lemme decide what word I want to use... 'Lovely'!! 'Brilliant!!' Enchanting, sweet, captivating,!!! What do I say!! It was so sweet and wonderful that ...

Hi.. First off, Welcome to YWS!! Now for the poem... It was very well written.. What I appretiate mainly in this poem of yours is the concept... It was a ...

Hi... Gosh this poem was so deep and nice!! Loved it instantly!! It flowed with a gentle and swift feel.. Also you have done brilliantly with the rhyming... I find ...

Hey.. So I've come to review.. I found the topic quite interesting so I came.. Well I must say its brilliant.. Like kinzzy, I will also say that the starting ...

Hi.. So starting was very nice and it flowed pretty well, and that made it a nice read.. Secondly i love the theme of your poem. also the simplicity with ...

Hi.. Well firs off, You got what you wanted.. probably (that's my guess..) You must have wanted people to laugh on reading this.. and guess what, You got it!! I ...

Hi.. I believe you are new here so, welcome to YWS!! If it is your first post her then I gotta say a thing- That was a bang and awesome ...