hamerkid2

It's a great concept and no huge grammatical errors. Except in the second and third line it doen't look like there are spaces after the periods (I'm part grammar nazi, ...

It's a cute little poem, but the middle stanza all rhymes, which is not the same as your first and last stanzas. I understand this poem was written for fun ...

nice poem. unique and interesting. It has a rhythm that works well with the lines in the poem. There aren't any grammar mistakes and it is prefect the way it ...

it's interesting. i haven't read too many poems set up like this one. the flow is good and the message is clear. keep up the good work

no i haven't. what is it called?

I kind of see what you are trying to say, but the subject is bland. Maybe change the style and add on to it and it would actually be a ...

the first book was the best, but still the overall story line for the series wasn't too boring for me

i like the flow of it. it's a very good poem any way. i find it hard to believe you just threw it together. the structure and language of it ...

glad some people have heard of them. i started them in seventh grade and they are still my favorite books three years later