halogirl4197

I like it! I usually write self-hating/suicidal (not that I am), sad poems too but none of mine compare to this! Great! :)

What is this talking about? I don't get the point of this whatsoever. Sorry =/.

VERY GOOD! I loved it! You should make a series of this! :)

Wow, nice :D

Its pretty good however I think your a bit to straight forward =/ be more descriptive and you'd be AWESOMER!! :D

you need to branch out more find more unusual words. Poetry isn't supposed to really make sense especially in a love poem :) keep practicing!

i like it :) short simple phrases with a good meaning! lol

haha nice! :)

i like it! :) its all true

you need to be more descriptive and its an okay murder scene =/ not to be mean but you can use a bit more improvement :) other then that you're ...

its pretty good, though I think you repeat your descriptive words WAY to much. I like how you described the woman though lol. You're pretty good :)

wow im impressed! when i read the first line i was sucked in :)

aww thats sweet! :)

I like it! :) if you lined it up like a poem it would've been perfect ^~^

Its okay =/ I liked your word structure however I think it would've been better if you hadn't rhymed other then that I like it :)