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Danteel never told me precisely what happened to Mattira after this, but by way of ship’s gossip and some riffling through old records, I eventually learned that she had indeed ...

Totally agree....*edits* Thanks a bunch!!! Edit: this way, the emphasis is on "a man," rather than the fact that he's dead--what I was shooting for in the first place. :P

Coolness. Not sure I want you to write ME a birthday poem, Whence, but I really enjoyed your style--for me, you have all the finesse of Incan but twice the ...

A million thanks, my Imp! *gives whole box of cookies* I've always been a little unsatisfied with this scene and I think you targeted the problem that I couldn't see. ...

hmmm....cad, what would you think if I just eliminated "here lies" after the first time--I don't know if I would be good with just "he," but do you think "a ...

Bless you, love. :)

Danteel had not expected Jonahn to be waiting for him. Nor had he expected the man to have an open bottle of brandy before him with two untouched tumblers. But ...

...it's beautiful, darling. Truly. (crap, I might as well go withdrawl my entries right now....)

Thanks for the feedback, Meep! The problem with the puppy-dog feel to the love described in the poem is that the only time I thought Snape might (realistically) EVER write ...

Cool advice, cad, thanks much! *blushes* stupid typo.....

Lovely, as ever darling! I wish, wish, wish I could give a better crit than that, but you have to understand that I read your stories for pleasure rather than ...

It amazes me how many people on here say they like this thing--all it really is to me is a combonation of a bad mood, a rainy day, and far ...

In response to: [spoiler] I totally wish Lily had chosen Snape! I mean, there's no evidence except that James was an arrogant annoyance, a prankster, and Snape was all sweet ...

I really don't get those who think the epilogue was no good--I loved it! It had all the giggly-fun sort of feeling of a fanfic (not that all fics are ...

Wow, I had totally forgotten this thing was on here. You honor me by noticing it, Sid, and I do appreciate your comments, but truly, this thing should have been ...