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Re: Monkey vs. Dragon: Terminator Four?
How funny! This has made my day!
Mon Mar 05, 2007 2:13 pm -
Re: Two Paces Wide, Four Paces Long.
Gray is spelled like this "gray". Grey is spelt like this in Britain, "Grey" it is only Americans that spell it "Gray" so ShadowTwits spelling is correct because she is ...
Sat Feb 24, 2007 5:34 pm -
Re: Missed Calls
I agree with Armadian about the stanzas, but other then that I really enjoyed this. Keep it up!
Sat Feb 24, 2007 2:39 am -
Re: Sweet Madness
I agree with everything Ofour said. Maybe change "deader" to "more dead"
Mon Feb 19, 2007 5:15 pm -
Re: Drops of Summer
drinking chocolate coffee creamers straight. haha me and my friends do this a lot too. This was really well written. I really liked it. Good descriptions
Sun Feb 18, 2007 3:29 pm -
Re: Chapter 1: The News
Thanks for all your help!
Thu Feb 15, 2007 11:28 pm -
Re: Tome of the Constellations: Chapter 2
I thought that this as really good. But I agree with Phorcys. Slow things down when they meet the seven wizards. Otherwise, I thought it was written well.
Tue Jan 30, 2007 4:55 pm -
Re: Assailed #1
Very interesting. I enjoyed reading this piece. The only problem I have is to maybe put more discription into your characters. Otherwise the punctuation and capitalization were really good. I ...
Mon Jan 29, 2007 9:58 pm -
Re: Prologue:The Golden Egg
thanks!
Thu Jan 11, 2007 1:12 am -
Re: The Tome of Constellation: Chapter 1
Really good! I really liked the beginning. The only thing I have to say is to check your capitalization and punctuation. Otherwise I really enjoyed reading this.
Sat Jan 06, 2007 11:07 pm -
Re: Prologue:The Golden Egg
I agree with everything. I have been trying to think of a new begining. thanks for all of your addvice!
Sat Jan 06, 2007 10:56 pm -
Re: Prologue:The Golden Egg
Thanks for all of the advice. Be sure that I will be working more on this and adding more details to make it more intersting.
Sat Jan 06, 2007 10:03 pm