guineapiggirl

Thanks for your lovely review! I think I'll change the capitalisation; on reflection, I agree. Lynx is pretty everywhere where I am in the UK, but that reference seems to ...

Thank you for all these lovely reviews! You're right about all of the iambic pentameter, of course. But it is so hard to do!

Thank you again for this review! Again, loads of super helpful tips for me! I am definitely going to look at my capitalisation after your reviews. I agree with you ...

Thank you Morrigan for the helpful advice! I'll look at expanding the poem perhaps with another stanza or two. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Thank you so much for your review! This is a lot of really helpful stuff for me to go away and look at, and apply to my other poetry as ...

Thank you for the positive review! I've since edited this a bit based on what other people have said :) I'm going to wait for further feedback from my English ...

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the story's message :) A lot for me to look at there and potentially to take into my writing in the future ...

Thank you, that's very kind :) I'll let you know when I upload more stuff.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And welcome, welcome, welcome to YWS! Yeah, the title's a bit dark, isn't it? XD When I first jotted this story it was more ...

I love Agatte too and I'm really glad you do! She's meant to be kind of heartless and have confused motives, but a basic will to do good, even if ...

Thanks a lot for your lovely review! I'm glad you managed to get a real sense of Agatte from this. I love her as a character... She feels really real ...

Aaaah, that makes sense with it being a deity!

Thank you for the really kind comments! I'm glad you liked it :) I wrote it while thinking a lot about all these death-related questions and so I think I ...

Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you like Areia! I love her. Killing her was rather upsetting! And also that you found the beard line funny, because it ...