guineapiggirl

HI. I've a few little things to suggest and say. I found that all the verses with once, twice, thrice got a little bit boring and some of them the ...

Oooh, this was interesting. It seemed like just a description of people waiting at the bus stop but the title suggested otherwise... I really like the way you've managed to ...

HI. I'm here to review! But first, welcome to YWS! I like this poem and it's very good for something you wrote when 10! That said, most of my poems ...

HI, guineapiggirl here to review! YOu've used soem really nice words to describe the northern lights in this poem and you've painted quite a nice picture. HOwever, there's nothing really ...

I'm sorry that this has been left for nearly a month with no reviews. It is very long! But I have read it all, and it is so good, and ...

Hey... I'm here to review this although I'm a bit scared after your comment on the last reviewer's review. Anyway, onto the poem. It's really really good. THis is a ...

YOU'RE A LIGHT! AHA! Pretty good job of a difficult type of poem that can be very boring. Well done. I have nothing really to suggest. Well, I have two ...

Heya! Hannah's got in with some sciencey and practical (and a bit of psychological...) stuff. I'm just going to review these grammatically and as descriptive images. First and most importantly, ...

This is great! This is really really great! Well done :D This made me actually laugh. I loved all of the science babble, especially. And the name of the condition. ...

Hey Cspr! I saw this and thought I'd give it a review because your stuff is always awesome, and sure enough this piece doesn't break the trend! You really have ...

Hey! I'm going to have a go at reviewing this. this is quite a hard poem to try and review really... "Skin, so stretchy, as I dug, twisted, growled, Wolf-like ...

Awesome poem! Lovely poem! In the description you said that you know what you want to say but you're not quite saying it. What i'm reading from this poem is ...

Hey! Guineapiggirl's going to give you a little review :D I liked this poem a lot. And I'm not going to be sarcastic and cross that out like the other ...

Hiya! Guineapiggirl's going to review this poem! I really like it. I like it so much that I've liked it! The end line made me chuckle. One verse that I ...

This is a really interesting little story you're telling here. I like it. I'm guineapiggirl and I'm going to review your poem. I think this is a pretty good narrative ...