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Re: Linger On Your Pale Blue Eyes
Heya! Gsp or Crocky here, at your service! Now, the warning that I put at the beginning of all my reviews; I tend to rip stories to shreds and point ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Firecrow
Hello, I'm Gsp or Crocky, and I will be your reviewer today! I'm really sorry, but I tend to rip stories to shreds. I am not responsible if I reduce ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Geek o' Gaming: Part Two
Hey Skye, it's me. (Bet you never would've guessed). Slowly, her eyes opened. Her head ached, each time her heart would beat it would send a surge of pain through ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Canyon Song (Working title) Prologue and Chapter 1
Hey Ballpoint! Gsp here as requested. :) AWESOME description, but that's expected from a poet. ;) One thing I noticed. The prologue is in present-tense, but Chapter 1 is in ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Temporary Love
Hey LoVeLeSs! Gsp here as requested. :D Wow. Just wow. This is unlike anything that I've read on this site before. I agree with youreit though, I'd give it a ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Winter Wonderland Chapter 1
Hey Ktg, Gsp here as requested. Okay, I'm going to apologize in advance for how harsh I am in my reviews. I'm a natural nitpicker, and even tiny things like ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Gone without me
Okay, let's try this again. No, I didn't accidentally click a link just when I finished the review. *deep breath* Hey, Gsp here as requested! I really liked this poem. ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Writers block
Hey Hope! 'Tis me! :D The thing I noticed most in here is apostrophes in all the wrong places, so that's what most of this review is going to be ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Ode to a mother
Hey, Gsp here! I'm sorry this is harsh. I'm a natural nitpicker, and bad grammar/spelling sends shivers down my spine. Okay, I didn't even have to read all of it ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Not the thing called Dollar - a tree-hugger poem :D
Heya Durrie, 'tis me, Crock! Them that can’t look past their noses, Are doomed to that fate of never seeing those things that make life real, That makes life beautiful, ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Ballad of the Blood (3)
Hey Infinite, Morgan here again. His robes were dark, with blood and stained with soot. No apostrophe here. It should look like this; His robes were dark with blood and ...
Oct 17, 2009 -
Re: Ballad of the Blood (2)
Hey, it's Morgan again. :) And guess what? I couldn't find anything wrong with it! But again, I commend your descriptive skills. But, as some people above me have said, ...
Oct 17, 2009 -
Re: Ballad of the Blood (1)
Hey Infinite, Morgan here again! :D Okay, I found ONE thing here. Flames rush out of Vladimor’s hands and constrict around the hobgoblin’s neck. The flames sizzle and tighten, choking ...
Oct 17, 2009 -
Re: Ballad of the Blood (0)
Heya Infinite, Morgan here! I love your descrpitive powers. People say I have good descriptions, but yours were just... Wow. I give you a star. You definetely deserve it. I ...
Oct 17, 2009 -
Re: Sing me a song, my sweet Morgrant. Pages 1-3
NUUU! Why!? The pink! It burns!!! *dies* Okay, but seriously, this is epic. You had me laughing so hard that I nearly woke up my parents. Write more! Now! I ...
Oct 6, 2009
