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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Linger On Your Pale Blue Eyes

    Heya! Gsp or Crocky here, at your service! Now, the warning that I put at the beginning of all my reviews; I tend to rip stories to shreds and point ...

    Jul 13, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Firecrow

    Hello, I'm Gsp or Crocky, and I will be your reviewer today! I'm really sorry, but I tend to rip stories to shreds. I am not responsible if I reduce ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Geek o' Gaming: Part Two

    Hey Skye, it's me. (Bet you never would've guessed). Slowly, her eyes opened. Her head ached, each time her heart would beat it would send a surge of pain through ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Canyon Song (Working title) Prologue and Chapter 1

    Hey Ballpoint! Gsp here as requested. :) AWESOME description, but that's expected from a poet. ;) One thing I noticed. The prologue is in present-tense, but Chapter 1 is in ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Temporary Love

    Hey LoVeLeSs! Gsp here as requested. :D Wow. Just wow. This is unlike anything that I've read on this site before. I agree with youreit though, I'd give it a ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Winter Wonderland Chapter 1

    Hey Ktg, Gsp here as requested. Okay, I'm going to apologize in advance for how harsh I am in my reviews. I'm a natural nitpicker, and even tiny things like ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Gone without me

    Okay, let's try this again. No, I didn't accidentally click a link just when I finished the review. *deep breath* Hey, Gsp here as requested! I really liked this poem. ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Writers block

    Hey Hope! 'Tis me! :D The thing I noticed most in here is apostrophes in all the wrong places, so that's what most of this review is going to be ...

    Jan 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ode to a mother

    Hey, Gsp here! I'm sorry this is harsh. I'm a natural nitpicker, and bad grammar/spelling sends shivers down my spine. Okay, I didn't even have to read all of it ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Not the thing called Dollar - a tree-hugger poem :D

    Heya Durrie, 'tis me, Crock! Them that can’t look past their noses, Are doomed to that fate of never seeing those things that make life real, That makes life beautiful, ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Ballad of the Blood (3)

    Hey Infinite, Morgan here again. His robes were dark, with blood and stained with soot. No apostrophe here. It should look like this; His robes were dark with blood and ...

    Oct 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Ballad of the Blood (2)

    Hey, it's Morgan again. :) And guess what? I couldn't find anything wrong with it! But again, I commend your descriptive skills. But, as some people above me have said, ...

    Oct 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Ballad of the Blood (1)

    Hey Infinite, Morgan here again! :D Okay, I found ONE thing here. Flames rush out of Vladimor’s hands and constrict around the hobgoblin’s neck. The flames sizzle and tighten, choking ...

    Oct 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Ballad of the Blood (0)

    Heya Infinite, Morgan here! I love your descrpitive powers. People say I have good descriptions, but yours were just... Wow. I give you a star. You definetely deserve it. I ...

    Oct 17, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Sing me a song, my sweet Morgrant. Pages 1-3

    NUUU! Why!? The pink! It burns!!! *dies* Okay, but seriously, this is epic. You had me laughing so hard that I nearly woke up my parents. Write more! Now! I ...

    Oct 6, 2009


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