grimy89098

wow nice poem as angel of death said its pretty much flawless, really cool poem what shows out is that its so true -grimy

:D awsome poem keep writing cause thats really good, A+ 4 u! can't wait to see more stuff from you -grimy

ok galerius, when i said "All expressed for only chosen eyes." i didnt mean for it to come across as arrogant, i meant that what ppl write they show only ...

for a terrible prompt that was pretty good! nicely done A+ 4 U! -Grimy

thanks everyone :D

cool, love the creepy vibe though really disturbing.... 0_o cool pic btw

the thing that makes this poem so strone is that its true, and yet so little number of people actually try to help the situation with poverty etc. poems like ...

awsome haiku's a funny A+ 4 U! my friend lol if laughter is the best medicine i bet none of your friends are ever sad lol nice creativity

wow, cool story like the way you explain things, not exactly telling but hinting im not gonna make a critique at the moment, too busy other than a few typos ...

hey shay awsome story, don't think i ever got a chance to say that at school as the others have said, you have talent, i hope you keep using it ...

wow, that's really good what you've suggested, thanks. do you mind if i use it? if you do just pm me and i wont use it in my next update ...

tanks for teh review it is the beggining by the way from all what ppl have said i know i need to do some serious editing on the prologue i ...

alright, thanks for the chance to explain alot of the points people are getting confused over 1. It is hot; he feels it through his hardened skin, through to his ...

Sol is a godd ess ; female chapter 1 is already is already posted, its in my portfolio if you wanna read it (its under "The Oath" folder) im working ...

thanks everyone! ill start edting it today and when im finished ill update both the prologue and chap 1 looking forward to anything anyone might have to say :D -Grimy