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Ok, so here's the (hopefully) finished story. oh, and PS: Ms Troe, if your reading this, I (Brandon) did write this, so it's not plagiarism. :D ---------------------------- Mistakes He snored ...

no no the review wasn't offensive at all, in fact I was thinking the exact same things about it. I'm gonna scrap this one for now, I've just been given ...

Hey, me again, thanks Lauren ^^ Yeh, this will probably end up as a short story, I'll be writing more this afternoon. And like I said it was written up ...

thanks everyone :D hopefully ill get the time to edit it a bit, once i get my homework done... (it could take a while :cry: )

lol! thats got to be the most random thing ive ever read XD i do like the twilight series but you've got a few good points there thanks for the ...

Thanks :D

no reviews.. is it that bad? :cry:

looked at sticky and found out it probably shouldn't be in this category, sorry bout that feel free to move it anyone who has that power

here's what i did to it: These strong walls, They hold all my fury, Against those pitiful people all around you. On the news, Being praised for wasting time and ...

hey, thanks for the reviews so sorry it took me so long to show up again, have been rather busy these last few months. the poem can be about a ...

nice, keep up the good work! :D -grimy

tell him to WRITE!!! thats really cool and if he says no hit him ova the head! if he doesn't keep writing and lets his writing go it'll be a ...

nice! high five! no? ok then (: liked this one, very nice. A+ 4 u! perhaps more feeling in the voice (last minute edit: sry, just saw the review above ...

nice (: ... yes, that's all im gonna say .. because everyone has said stuff i wanted to... ... darn... -grimy Please don't swear unless it's in a literary work! ...

thanks for the review, you've pointed out alot of what i know needs fixing already, but alot of it is new to me im pretty sure lackwit is more of ...