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Wow! This was very beautiful. Despite the sadness of the poem, I think you painted a very clear picture. It's like sad, yet assuring at the same time. Very good ...

Thanks for the feed back. I see what you mean about my sentences being a little long. I especially noticed how long the last part was when I wrote. But, ...

Thank you very much demib. I really appreciate it.

Very Shakespearean, you should do more of this. This suits you well. Not much to critique, just thought I'd give you my thoughts.

Now, this is getting interesting. Very twisted and cryptic, kind of disturbing. Love it! Only obvious problems is the mispellings and other little mistakes, but that's irrelivant at this point. ...

I liked this. It was funny. Short and ironic. Very to the point, but yet it made me wanted to see more. You should do something like this again, with ...

this piece was very beautifully written. Wouldn't change a thing.

Okay, I didn't mean to get all spiritual. I read what you wrote and I must have made the mistake of taking it at face value. I'll remember not to ...

Nice poem, it's a simple message that has a powerful impact. I think every christian can relate to this. I liked the short stanzas. You said so much without having ...

Thank you all so much for the reviews and suggestions. I've made a few changes, as far as breaking it up into three separate parts. I think this works better ...

Thank you for the advice. It is rather long. I actually wrote it off the cuff in one sitting. It's amazing what you can come up with with a note ...

Loved it. Coffee is always a good cure for a broken heart

This speaks of loss. as if you know that the relationship has ended and all you can do is wish them well.

This seems like a poem of being rescued by someone. As if they have come to whisk you away from some miserable life, like a knight in shining armor of ...

This seems to express excitement and enlightenment of a first love. The confusion that goes along with it, as well as the curiosity.