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  • Other » General, General Re: Life is like Boxing

    This is inspirational. It's raw and heartfelt and I appreciate the piece because I know that most people in the world feel the same way, including me. Thank you for ...

    Jul 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Worth It ?

    Your piece moved me, because I sort of relate to it. There were minor grammar errors but it's all good. It was intense yet soft for me. Awesome job.

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What's a kiss worth these days?

    Wow. How extraordinary. It's a beautiful and intense piece. Awesome.

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Happy days

    What an optimistic piece you've got there! I can see the real happiness through the piece and it also put a smile on my face. :)

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: She Knows Him

    What a very cute drabble! Although it would've been nice if you gave them a little but more depth and background. But overall it was beautiful.

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Faith

    This was beautiful in its simplicity. I loved it. Wonderful job!

    Jun 27, 2011


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