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Thank you very much. Your advice was helpful and will take it into account when revising!

thank you! I shall take a look.

thank you so much! the funny thing is with this poem I didn't think it was my best poem but it seems to hit people the most.

maybe if you said screeching so it would be, " is a loud, screeching hiss"

thank you ! I mean I don't always write them but I do sometimes

Thanks ^.^

thanks :3

yeah I know it's a basic type poem. I like to experiment in every way possible to try different styles

haha aw thank ya! and I like have an intended piece of writing that could inflict a lot of thought on the reader. I feel the fun of poetry is ...

Thank you for reviewing it. I ended up having to cut down half the paper anyway because of the character requirement. So it ended up being a lot different

Thank you so so SOOO much! I am glad you liked the essay and your advice was exactly what I was looking for. Thank you!

thank you! and a haiku is three lines the first line having 5 syllables the next having 7 and the last three. and thank you very much!

haha its a start; most works need revision anyway and best way to revise is to get other peoples opinions

Thank you!

Thank you for the review- I see what you mean I'll go back and take a look