godlypopo

This is a very gripping peace of work. A good prologue. I like how you have used free verse to turn the poem into a story, making it more meaningful. ...

This is a good poem that I enjoyed reading. I like the general rhyming scheme of abac and abcb as it creates a nice flow to the poem. I like ...

This is the most realistic poem I have ever read :p I like how you repeat I am a little universe. This is because it leaves an impact on the ...

This is a very beautiful idea for a poem. I love how the imagery gives you a clear picture of the idea that you try to get across. It's a ...

This is a very Interesting poem. The rhyming scheme makes it stand out and has an impact on the reader. I like the essence of an extended metaphor of the ...

This is amazing x I love how I can reflect to the story as I used to love to play pretend and do role plays. I think my favourite thing ...

Wow! I love the mysterious and lonely aspect to the poem :) I think that you exceed in creating an emotional aspect and you can clearly see an idea of ...

That was a very clever way of describing coconut-scented lotion. I like the part where you go close your eyes. Lather the smooth balm between your fingers. I feel like ...

A very good story that has lovely imagery good job! Good things: -very good imagery-e.g It was her hand that supported him throughout his life. -I love the way you ...