glecile

Hi! I'm here for a review! I like your hook in the first paragraph which is "endangered." It made me think of many things that teenagers can do nowadays. One ...

Hello, splendidsay! I'm here for a review. :) Welcome to YWS! The title was related in your course, isn't?? And then goes along :) By the way, I found a ...

Good job with your essay! The thesis statement was clearly explained and very informative. Some of my comments for this: " According to Naueret, 2012 emotional experiences may include having ...

Hi JGScottify! glecile here for a review! I enjoyed reading your essay. It was very informative and the readers where likely to relate with it. Good thing that you have ...

Hi, Chairazell! I'm here for a review! You've got a very good title and thus, becomes catchy to the readers.I like your thesis statement and you've explained it in your ...

Hello, miajaneboo!! Nice essay, but something that I noticed was defining teenage years at the end of the essay. It is better defining your main topic at beginning of it. ...

Hi!! Something that I noticed was the wrong usage of capitalization. More than that, your essay met the topic given. You have compared technology in the past and of today. ...