gingerbeardsan

Hmmmmmmm Okay, I had a few different thoughts come to me while reading. First, The structure is neat, I like it when poems are displayed in an unconventional orientation. Not ...

Stupendous and immaculate. The entire time I was reading I was on track and was easy to follow along. Clean punctuation and great use of imagery, there is very little ...

To start, The first thing I noticed was your opening statement. It should be a solid, full idea with no commas. The first sentence of your story (Even a prologue) ...

This is honestly the first time I've ever read something like this. The premise of coarse being a literal explanation of what hell is and how it would drive a ...

Hello there, Gingerbeardsan to do a daily poem review :] Your word play is very creative, I get the idea that Static is a theme for your poem you do ...

Good evening and thank you for the update on my wall, feel free to keep me updated and I will do what I can to help you proof your works ...

I say the best writing is the kind that makes other writers inspired. After reading the first 3 paragraphs mind went racing into the direction and where I would be ...

Catching and intriguing start with a grand over-view to key points of your story right away. I have a million questions as to what is going on and how our ...

This reminded me a little bit of the theme for The Golden compass. The Nordic language is beautiful and you chose well to do so. If I was being honest, ...