ghost223

I purposefully lacked major emotions. that part was supposed to let the reader choose whether to interpret is as me feeling numb, or just chopping the poem. Adds effect.

I have more on here, and more to come.

I do speak from experience

Also, ghostie is fine. :)

Thank you. We can talk if you'd like. :) Message me whenever. The rhyme scheme was intentionally meant to make you slow down and process is. This poem isn't meant ...

Thank you. :)

i dunno if I'm comfortable doing that

I won't change it, but I'll take your words into consideration.

Eh It's a gift and curse

Honesty is my downfall.

:)

Thank you. I intend fully to post all of my works at some point, but it's a shame that I have to have points in order to do so...

Send you it how?

You're very welcome

Some of these thing I disagree with, but others I will try to keep in mind as I continue to write, but everything you mentioned that I did in this ...