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Re: Growing Up
I really liked this poem. It really hit the spot on how people grow up. The only thing I am going to say is the formatting. It's just a 'me' ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: Death Won't Set You Free
This is such a thoughtful piece of writing. Your work is amazing and full of honesty; although we don't know what people are going through we want the best for ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: The Darkest Hour.
This was a really creative piece of writing, I think you were really imaginative with it. However the formatting of the writing made it really hard to understand a lot ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: Run-Part One
First things first, I really liked this piece because I love the Hunger Games. I love the names that you chose for the characters. Great job with that. However when ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: I'm Sorry
This poem is truly amazing. I loved it when the stanzas started to begin with "I'm not sorry." this work clearly teaches others how to pick themselves up after a ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: The Sneeze
The description in the story was great, however it was a little hard to follow. One minute it was describing infinite nothingness and then it was describing a nostril. Other ...
Dec 27, 2013
