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Re: The Beat
Hi there, This story seems to be interesting. But you need to revise it in order to rectify grammatical mistakes you've made. There are a few, but they must be ...
Apr 20, 2013 -
Re: TOMORROW: Trials of the Lost Swallows Chapter One
Gaurav is here for his short review................. This is how I feel about the following Story:- Fantastic , Seems like a romantic story but can't say as it is Prologue ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Swan Song
Hello , This is Gaurav here to review your work, First of all, Welcome to This site and society. Now , Your work is really heart touching . I appreciate ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Then Unknown Planet: Prologue.
This is Gk's short review....... At first I wanna say that , Your story is quite fascinating. Now what I fell about about the plot. Plot: Very nice with every ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: The Fall of Domina Clepta -Chapter Two
As I am not much experienced as compared to others so I may make this review short. So at first , The Story :- It seems like appealing and interesting ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: The Angel of Death
Wow!! so live imagery !. Very nice. This is a short review of this fiction . I like the story and concept . I don't know whether it is a ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: 911-prologue
First of all , a great piece of fiction it is ! Very nice Theme and concept but a little more description of the actions of people may bring vividness ...
Apr 1, 2013
