gamechanger10

I am still living at home and I'd say I'm pretty half-in-half-out of the water. This is pretty much my life right now.

Thanks for the reviews, guys.

Amen, my friend.

Haha. Thanks everybody. I guess I was just having a bit of a bad day...

It's good. A bit unclear at some points, but that might just be me and my sleep deprivation. It's good. I can't say it's my favorite, but it's definitely got ...

Well, I guess that's good, Joey, 'cause I don't.

Oh. I never even thought about changing it from second person...

Thanks M.J. I'll try to find alternate words.

Thanks so much everybody!

Well, umm... This wasn't one of your best pieces. The flow was a bit off, and it seemed a tad cliche to me. I understood that you were coming from ...

Well, M.J., they were in a house. I thought I made that pretty clear, but, hey, that's your opinion. And about the next chapter, that's up to Mark and Gabe ...

Thanks everyone!

umm...okay? Is that telling me not to rhyme? Or that my poem wasn't good because I rhymed?

This piece was great! So simple, yet the message was so deep! The flow was great until it got to...wait...I just lost my train of thought... Never mind. The flow ...

It's not intended to be funny, Bookmarker. Suicide isn't funny.