gallifreygal11

You haven't eaten a raspberry?! THEY ARE AMAZING!

So I know everyone had a lotto say about this, so I have edited to please your demands! I hope you like it!

Thanks you so much for your input! I know some of your comments were just about spelling/grammar errors but others about the sentence structure really helped! I may not actually ...

thank you so much for your valuable input! I hate it when people are just like "it's good, I liked it" THAT GIVES ME NOTHING! Thank you so much for ...

could you specify, what was "good" about it? What good I change to make it better?

THANKS YOU SO MUCH! I love reviews like this where the reviewer actually tells me something to change to make it better, most people are just like "yeah, it's really ...

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I really love this poem. It tells a story while still staying true to the art of poetry. Those are always my favorite poems! The story has a brilliant plotline. ...

thank you so much for your review! I love it when people go to that much effort to write such a detailed review!

This is a great poem! You are an amazing writer, keep it up! Hope you write more!

I really really like this poem, it is expressive, intelligent, and the imagery is fabulous. I find it wry, hard, and dry. Great job!

WOW! I am loving this! I love the way you describe things like a forest, my only edit is that you might want to look at the end of the ...

okay so I have had a lot of questions bout my line "as I watch face to amaze." Some people don't like it or don't understand it, but I myself ...

this really is a very long prolouge!