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It would be correct to say that my line about gems was and is a bit amateur. You did seem to notice more from the piece that made that line ...

Ahh no worries! As you can see, it took months for me to get back you on this one anyways. If you'd like to review it again I'd love your ...

Of course there is hope lizzy not all people continue to be bad. Not everyone takes forever. And of course friends are there to keep the good vibes rolling. Life ...

Well thank you for any sort of response. And you review is not jumbled or mumbled. I feel like you did exactly what was needed and asked a question about ...

Well the material is my undying care and affection. Of course something fuzzy and soft would do the trick.

Really? Well thank you. I'm glad you saw the subtleties intended for the reader. If you've ever felt love I would hope that this is enough to bring those feelings ...

This is an awesome take on a great story.

Awesome stuff. There should be more writing like this that are made into movies. I know movies are not a readers friend, but SciFi like this is still lack in ...

I'm sorry you didn't do any revising. I just got caught reading the first few sentences again. They are very good. I was in a whole other world again. I ...

That makes sense. It is tough to pick words for soft delicate sounds. I notice you did a little revising. I like it much more now. The words coming together ...

Thanks.

Thank you for reading my poem. If that's what it is. I am actually unsure. This was just something off the top of my head. This is just a bunch ...

I appreciate your insight. It helps me out quite a bit. Thank you for your honesty about the weaker portions of this work. Every bit of criticism helps. Thanks.

First of all thanks for reading. I had a difficult putting this into a category. Could you point me into the right direction as to what the category might be?