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Try removing the first slash(/) in the [/quote][/quote]! I'm just happy seeing someone new reviewing poetry! Best of luck! ~Nicol

No, Titi, they aren't. But a better words to say that is, I'm taken an inspiration from it. Go hang out in my wall, if you dare. :D Thanks, anyway!

Dear aspiringauthor45, I know it feels weird when I wrote the bird part. I will reconsider that. Well, the bird symbolized the freedom that the speaker once had. I think ...

Such simple words, Stranger. I agreed.

No problem! As the first reviewer said in the reply box after his/her reply, you can edit by clicking the "edit work" button under the "tool" at the right. ~ ...

Thanks; sorry for the late reply. I hope you're still in this...

No problem. :)

It's okay... AND please, pardon me for my lateness. I don't have all the time in the world after all. Okay, I'm glad I still remembered this. Okay, I. Unaddressed ...

Hey. I will like want to try your suggestion rewriting this poem and the others. Your review is helpful, thanks~!

I thank you very much for your suggestions. And pardon me for the last reply. These suggestions will prove helpful to me. Yet, thanks!

Thanks. I had been too long not writing poetry and supposed, this would be bad. Therefore, most of them kind of like just popped over in my head. Yet, thanks!

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This is really an awkward story. Of course, I do know about some mistakes about the sentences after I reread it for about three times, but I just don't bother ...

Haha... Of course that this thing have a lot of flaws. What can we hope from a story that made in the night? Well, thanks for the tips and I'm ...

Thanks for pointing that, but actually, there are poems that don't follow the rules of haiku like haiku got 17 syllables in it and divided by 5/7/5, but the person ...