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Wow! This is great, especially for the escape part. I thought a kid like the lead will just stay at home but instead, he ran out of the house. Are ...

Wow..! This is great and sad and touching..Hmm..perhaps I didn't read enough, why is the guy in their house basement? The guy stayed there for his safety or just to ...

Wow..really a cold sweat..are you going to continue?

Hello there, although it's short but its nice to be good bonds with brothers. But...I wonder why is the title as "Little Wonders"? Is the wonder means the relationship between ...

Nice..I'm sorry to spam this story again. i liked it when those girls believe..normally in other stories, people don't believe such thing even though there is evidence and things like ...

This is nice and I like it. The mysterious starts where a dream becomes true and the painting scene. I like those things and a good story you have here.

Wow..you get inspiration but going out and meet things..For me, I just imagine and ideas just came to me..perhaps when I lost the idea, I will also need to go ...

Yo. I'm here again, this is story is nice. As I'm not good in critique, i don't and I just read and see if i like it. And you passed ...

This is so nice and warming. Good story!

This is nice and I want to know more about Lilla, write more. This is good!

Thanks for the comments and the changes you make. I guess if i pass this on to my previous English teacher, she would shoot me from the start till the ...

This is a nicely written story. please do continue. thanks

Hey this is a great story and i think the title fits into the story. Continue it! I want to know more..the ending if there is.

This is nice and cute!

Hello and I've read through the story. Its kinda cute when you write both diaries as one story Its funny when the girl say its quite expensive for the diary ...