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Re: Holding Me Back
All true. haha sorry if that was creepy i was trying to get the crap he wrote off of here
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 5
Wow Lumi. This piece is amazing absolutely no changes needed! Keep it up! I love your writing!
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Voices
Beautiful. Sick. So much detail it is amazing how in depth on the topic this poem is. No changes needed. Keep it up please.
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
All I am going to say is, that was odd.
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: How Can We Sleep
Wonderful poem. Very deep and extremely original. I can feel your emotions and passion for writing.
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: NaNoWriMo theme song.
Totally awesome! This song honestly made me laugh out loud! Very entertaining I really like the lines No, you don't have time to up date the status on your Facebook ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Forever Suffocated
Good work. The poem was very intense. I was hooked immediately by your first line and kept wamtimg to read. Excellent vernacular and figurative language. It was intruiging and deep ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: See No Evil, Hear No Evil, Feel No Evil
Wow. This is really deep. I love your use of figurative language and i could feel you in your writing. Very personal/
Oct 24, 2010