fries

This is sweet, I love it. I love how you compared love to the rain, and its amazing. Really great piece -fRiEs

This is really nice, and it flowed really great which add to my liking of it. A bit confusing as they said but I think that's what makes it more ...

Lol, I know its impossible to outrun a bear- Im not kookoo! I just wrote this, so this is a really first rough draft. Thats why she didnt make it ...

Wow! Total shocker here at the end! I would have never expected that. I loved the story. Wow, I'm still shocked at what just happened. The only thing I can ...

This is my first having to restart a story! Ugh! Lol. Oh, I'm going to busy for the next couple of weeks so this story wont be posted until like ...

Oh, that's the same thing my teacher told me. That my sentences are sentence fragments. But I don't know that's just the way I write, and he told me it ...

:) Ha ha, I know I've been thinking of rewriting my whole story from the beginning. Like start it off the first day she woke up till finally the week ...

:) Thannks! And I know ,lol, it looked kinda funny twice, but I was like whatever. I changed it now. And yeah I can hear it in my head as ...

Thats when it happened, a sound like metal hitting a surface. My mind was registering nothing else, but blackness.( What just happened here?)* What just happened here is a mystery ...