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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: For my Angel

    I have decided, I cannot control my feelings towards her. She is way to good for me. I know I will never do better, than her. She is a dream ...

    Dec 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Forbidden Love

    I agree with the others, this is a really great poem- and I wouldnt have guessed it was your first, either. There is no rhyming, which I like, because I ...

    Jul 13, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Cha-chew It (an Undo It by Carrie Underwood parody)

    Hahaha, OMG I was laughing threw the whole thing. Okay I clicked this because HELLO! Carrie Underwood is freaking awesome, and I like that song. And I wanted to see ...

    May 28, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Words Will Always Hurt You

    I really liked this, especially the quote I've never heard it before. One thing though, you should have at least entered the main characters name into the story... added a ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Leap Of Glory

    I really like this poem, it shows what is happening these days mostly to teenage girls, like Phoebe Prince, etc. It gives them a better story than what we hear ...

    Apr 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: life

    Wow, that is a really nice poem! It really got me thinking about everything I've been going through the past few months, years... I love it! How about changing the ...

    Apr 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Bittersweet Summer (Previously Untitled) [pt.2]

    :) I still love this story. But I'm starting to hate Blake- he is a jerk. I know you got a more devious twist to this story, and I cant ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Bittersweet Summer (Previously Untitled) [pt.1]

    Wow! Total shocker here at the end! I would have never expected that. I loved the story. Wow, I'm still shocked at what just happened. The only thing I can ...

    Apr 4, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Forbidden to Love, chap. 1, part 1 (12+ for violence)

    I'm game! Okay I absolutely love this story already, I know this is for science fiction but change it to romance because I definitely cant wait to see how the ...

    Mar 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Unwanted Chapter One {Read Prologe First}

    :) I really enjoyed reading this Chapter of your story, and can't wait to read the rest. I swear if I hadn't gotten off yesterday I would have finished it ...

    Mar 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love From Music: Chapter 3

    I kinda agree with the others. A little more description and it would make a whole difference- meaning better. :) This chapter is a also a little short but satisfying. ...

    Feb 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: ART

    From the Heart It's more then just art, it comes from the heart Wow, i agree with this part being magnificent. I really like the way you see art, because ...

    Feb 13, 2010


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